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PostPosted: 31 Aug 2018, 04:11 
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My first day in the game was looking at the game and watching the investigators' notice after a night of searching. I am a very active player every day I attack all 5 ruin that I find. And surprisingly today, my investigators found ruin 7, I did not believe in my eyes, and I began to look for places where my investigators were carrying information about ruin 7. It was a surprise when I saw it and then I immediately followed it. I was very happy to see that no one attacked it. I immediately announced to my state, unfortunately my no one appeared. and I decided to attack alone after the waiting period and I received a message stating my hero was stunned :cry: , thought everything would end and luckily our Vngtriu boss appeared. level 54 and a mighty army he helped me attack and conquer ruin 7 for 30 minutes. and finish my morning a wonderful morning :lol:


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PostPosted: 31 Aug 2018, 04:13 
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TnVn wrote:
My first day in the game was looking at the game and watching the investigators' notice after a night of searching. I am a very active player every day I attack all 5 ruin that I find. And surprisingly today, my investigators found ruin 7, I did not believe in my eyes, and I began to look for places where my investigators were carrying information about ruin 7. It was a surprise when I saw it and then I immediately followed it. I was very happy to see that no one attacked it. I immediately announced to my state, unfortunately my no one appeared. and I decided to attack alone after the waiting period and I received a message stating my hero was stunned :cry: , thought everything would end and luckily our Vngtriu boss appeared. level 54 and a mighty army he helped me attack and conquer ruin 7 for 30 minutes. and finish my morning a wonderful morning :lol:


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PostPosted: 31 Aug 2018, 04:27 
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TnVn wrote:
TnVn wrote:
My first day in the game was looking at the game and watching the investigators' notice after a night of searching. I am a very active player every day I attack all 5 ruin that I find. And surprisingly today, my investigators found ruin 7, I did not believe in my eyes, and I began to look for places where my investigators were carrying information about ruin 7. It was a surprise when I saw it and then I immediately followed it. I was very happy to see that no one attacked it. I immediately announced to my state, unfortunately my no one appeared. and I decided to attack alone after the waiting period and I received a message stating my hero was stunned :cry: , thought everything would end and luckily our Vngtriu boss appeared. level 54 and a mighty army he helped me attack and conquer ruin 7 for 30 minutes. and finish my morning a wonderful morning :lol:


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PostPosted: 31 Aug 2018, 14:44 
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Please, add more description of the battle itself.


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PostPosted: 02 Sep 2018, 20:00 
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This "story" is awful; the plain truth.

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PostPosted: 07 Sep 2018, 15:58 
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hatalabanana wrote:
Please, add more description of the battle itself.

Sorry I'm a newcomer so I do not know if it's my job to tell the story after the 7th attack so I deleted the battle information. I am Vietnamese who should tell a story in English is a difficult task for management to understand and help me complete this task. thank you


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PostPosted: 08 Sep 2018, 13:10 
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TnVn wrote:
hatalabanana wrote:
Please, add more description of the battle itself.

Sorry I'm a newcomer so I do not know if it's my job to tell the story after the 7th attack so I deleted the battle information. I am Vietnamese who should tell a story in English is a difficult task for management to understand and help me complete this task. thank you
Then perhaps try to write it in Vietnamese and have it translated (if you think that will help you write better). This isn't a "story" ... this reads with no more spark than if you were telling us about your breakfast. There's no imagination and certainly nothing interesting about what is written here. If you opened a book to a chapter would this be something you'd like to find and read inside? -- Seven mundane sentences about presumably the same feelings each player endures while finding Arch Ruin.

If you make a well enough re-attempt, I may help you with getting it fit in English, but how it is currently is miserably lacking.

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For the green valleys where dragons fly
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PostPosted: 14 Sep 2018, 12:48 
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TnVn, the story can be written by another game, so, you can ask for help as well.


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