Sp1x and Bizzard28 lvl 7 Ruin Genesis.

[Sp1x]

It was hot summer day when king Bizzard28 was exploring southwest part of Genesis world. After long day explorers noticed ancient ruined castle swarming with monsters let by Monster hero of enormous strength, explorers rushed back to report to their king of this threat. Immediately spies were sent to the ruin in order to analyze potential threat, as spies investigated ruin very closely they discovered horde of monsters which was even impossible to count. Spies also discovered big treasure of Black Gems which was guarded by monsters.

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This kind of treasure could not be left in the hands of monsters so swift action should have taken place, king Bizzard28's army was not strong enough to defeat countless monsters alone so messenger has sent to Ally king Sp1x whose army were dwelling in camp nearby. After analyzing strength of monster closely king Sp1x called for arms, from capital of his kingdoms millions of brave warriors gathered to go on this honorable conquest. King Sp1x sent his most powerful hero Hunter in charge of army and were sent to camp in order to fill the ranks. Finally countless army of brave warriors has reached camp, after a short rest fully equipped army marched towards the ancient Ruin on the way they were joined by the army of king Bizzard28. So together 2 heroes were leading combined army toward the to ancient ruin.

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Path was hard as armies went through big storm caused by Monster hero. Both kings were dedicated to see the battle trough and without slightest hesitation they continued their march forward. It took several hours to reach ruins.
Finally armies have reached the ruin and what they saw was beyond comprehension. Horrifying countless monsters, most of army had fled the battlefield in horror,

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battle seemed to have been lost, but heroes were dedicated to return to their kings with victory and pride, they gathered all their strength and with they most brave warriors who remained stormed through ranks of countless monsters. Glorious battle took place, all the warriors fought hardest and finally all their bravery paid off when monster hero was beheaded. https://prnt.sc/ezV-AuFHp0Gj So combined armies of 2 kings emerged victorious.

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After eliminating all the monster warriors called celebration, great feast was served and all the warriors tired from battle were rewarded with best ale in the kingdoms. After celebrations two Kings shared treasure taken from monsters and returned to their own kingdoms.

[freeharika]

The story should be improved. Please, read the rewarded stories as the examples.

[Sp1x]

The story should be improved. Please, read the rewarded stories as the examples.

now?

[freeharika]

Please, add more details of the battle itself and the reward is yours.

[Sp1x]

Please, add more details of the battle itself and the reward is yours.

done.

[freeharika]

Still it is not enough to get the reward.

[Sp1x]

Still it is not enough to get the reward.

what exactly is missing? are you joking? what is that story not as good as other players ? I am not editing any more I do not care

[freeharika]

Please, add more details in this part `battle seemed to have been lost, but heroes were dedicated to return to their kings with victory and pride, they gathered all their strength and with they most brave warriors who remained stormed through ranks of countless monsters. Glorious battle took place, all the warriors fought hardest and finally all their bravery paid off when monster hero was beheaded. https://prnt.sc/ezV-AuFHp0Gj So combined armies of 2 kings emerged victorious.`

[Sp1x]

Please, add more details in this part `battle seemed to have been lost, but heroes were dedicated to return to their kings with victory and pride, they gathered all their strength and with they most brave warriors who remained stormed through ranks of countless monsters. Glorious battle took place, all the warriors fought hardest and finally all their bravery paid off when monster hero was beheaded. https://prnt.sc/ezV-AuFHp0Gj So combined armies of 2 kings emerged victorious.`

I am not editing any more. Every player is copy-pasting stories with different screens. I wrote everythign by myslelf. If you have quest like this you should have some guidlines how to do it. At least number of words. Than this depands on one persons mood. I do not need that lvl 3 artefact

[freeharika]

The main demand regarding the stories is description of the battle itself.