Lancelet & Memduhdemon Level 7 ruin

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Lancelet & Memduhdemon Level 7 ruin

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In a distant land, in the old but strong castle, it was a busy day, just like all the others. People were running in every direction doing their assigned tasks. Armies were on their way to defeat our enemies, and yes, we have lots of enemies in this land. All the kings are trying to defeat each other.

That day was the just the same as most other days. I was at a small table in a large meeting room at the castle reviewing and composing reports. It was so boring but then I heard someone talking about a secret place full of monsters guarding a cave of black gems. I smiled and thought “same old story”… then a knight ran into the meeting room.

“My Lord, a messenger wants to talk you, he says he has an important message”.

I was really tired becase of constant attacks and defence during past weeks but the messenger insisted seeing me so I told my Knight to let him in. The messenger carried a message from Tayfunto, who is my old friend and an ally from the great RedDragon clan. I thought maybe it was about a salt lake appearing near to the kingdom, however the messenger brought news that I always thought was only a dream.

My old friend Tayfunto had found a level 7 ruin, all my tiredness was gone, I felt alive and excited. I started to make the calculations to defeat that ruin with the bad news that just the two of us couldn’t even come close to victory over it.

That began a race against time, others could find this dungeon and destroy it before me. So I reported it my another old friend, Lancelet. When he heard the problem, my request for help was accepted but there was another problem, a lack of resources to send our armies… This took a lot of time but we didn’t have any other option but to wait and pray that no one else explored it. At last Lancelet’s army was ready to fight.

Now it’s time for war, it’s time to attack the ruin but this wasn’t easy. Level 7 ruins are an enemy that are not well known and they have been heard about only from stories told by ancient kings long since passed. There was a fear inside of all our warriors, we could feel it. Army commander Lancelet gathered the army and tried to encourage our men with these words:

“Today it is time to write history and you have power to succeed. Otherwise our race is under danger of extinction. They won’t bring the war to us, we take the war to them because time is not on our side.”

With these encouraging words the army was ready for the war against the dangerous monsters. Lancelet started the first attack with the help of King Memduhdemon. The whole army marched towards the arch ruin. In the dark you could see resident monsters. All military units were ready for the battle according to our plan and only waited for the order to attack. There was a deafening silence.

Something was wrong! Memduhdemon observed the ruin and saw another army before us, just two minutes in front. What we had feared had happened. It was the great King Wreckyourtown from NoxTerra clan. He had thought and calculated that he could conquer the dungeon himself. We needed to check this and after the calculation we realized that King Wreckyourtown couldn’t conquer the ancient ruin alone, so we waited for him to fail. It was just as exciting and hopeful waiting for our armies to arrive.

As the last few seconds counted down we just closed our eyes. When we opened them again, we saw that Wreckyourtown had been defeated but he had weakened the ancient ruin for us. We were saddened for his loss but thankful all the same.

Our campaign was long and fierce. Many soldiers were killed on the battlefield. Even the healing power of our Templars was not able to resurrect all the dead bodies. Despite this, the army returned with praise on your lips, great songs of joy were heard as they marched home. The battle had been successful, the Arch Ruin was defeated, destroyed, no more! Our heroes and armies conquered the monsters and brought priceless treasures to our kingdoms.
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#2 Post by tayfunto »

Congratulations!!!
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#3 Post by HUSOE »

Tebrikler. Başarılarınızın devamını diliyorum.
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#4 Post by Muratek_tr »

Tebrikler arkadaşlar. Helal olsun iyi günlerde harcayın.
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#5 Post by Arbash »

Congrats! Great feat, the story however needs improvement. It should be written in English and a screenshot of BG gained should be attached.
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#6 Post by lancelet »

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#7 Post by Arbash »

The story and the screenshots shall be in the same posting. The text needs to be improved.
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#8 Post by lancelet »

Arbash wrote:The story and the screenshots shall be in the same posting. The text needs to be improved.

Sorry. I changed :)
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#9 Post by Arbash »

You did not change the story. The story should be much better.
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#10 Post by lancelet »

Arbash wrote:You did not change the story. The story should be much better.

:( enough or No ?
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#11 Post by Arbash »

The story has become much better, so we would ask you to improve it even further and the reward is yours.
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#12 Post by Muratek_tr »

Arbash wrote:The story has become mush better, so we would ask you to improve it even further and the reward is yours.

It's been 3rd time you are refusing to give rewards for the story. His native language is NOT english but all of us thinks that, this story is pretty good. As an administration representative you'uld show some tolerance for it because We were FORCED to move from Turkish server to England server. Even in the beganning he should not write the story in english for that. Administration should open sub-forums for each country players and each country should has their own moderator to help and improve the game it self. The attitude of the administration is so deeply ignorant and single sided and i don't think i am the only one who thinks like that.
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#13 Post by atakanata1 »

I agree.
We understand the ban unfairly dumped written yazıya type again.
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#14 Post by Sulawesi »

Muratek_tr wrote:
Arbash wrote:The story has become mush better, so we would ask you to improve it even further and the reward is yours.

It's been 3rd time you are refusing to give rewards for the story. His native language is NOT english but all of us thinks that, this story is pretty good. As an administration representative you'uld show some tolerance for it because We were FORCED to move from Turkish server to England server. Even in the beganning he should not write the story in english for that. Administration should open sub-forums for each country players and each country should has their own moderator to help and improve the game it self. The attitude of the administration is so deeply ignorant and single sided and i don't think i am the only one who thinks like me.

I definitely agree.
All we are forced to play uk server and it is a big injustice not only for us but also for British players too. You are forcing the players for using english and most players doesnt know. We are not here because we want, we are here because you want. So you cant say that we cant use our native languages. If you make an adjustment like that you should organize everythings including forums. "Administration should open sub-forums for each country players and each country should has their own moderator to help and improve the game it self."
Please do something about that issue, and please make something nice do not make this game harder to play....
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#15 Post by Lecter_hr »

Muratek_tr wrote:
Arbash wrote:The story has become mush better, so we would ask you to improve it even further and the reward is yours.

It's been 3rd time you are refusing to give rewards for the story. His native language is NOT english but all of us thinks that, this story is pretty good. As an administration representative you'uld show some tolerance for it because We were FORCED to move from Turkish server to England server. Even in the beganning he should not write the story in english for that. Administration should open sub-forums for each country players and each country should has their own moderator to help and improve the game it self. The attitude of the administration is so deeply ignorant and single sided and i don't think i am the only one who thinks like that.
that this is ok but also a lot of people not the name of English and do not know how to write in English because I would add, if it is possible to make servr neu option where anybody can write in their language and that in addition there is an option for translation in your language .
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#16 Post by Mugi_tr »

thats true most of people doesnt know english and nobody didnt ask people when they move servers here and he is one turkish player when he started his server his language was turkish so its not ok to refuse for this kind of things administration is for everbody for all servers so they admin has to accept much language have a nice game :?:
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#17 Post by eccentric_tr »

Muratek_tr wrote:
Arbash wrote:The story has become mush better, so we would ask you to improve it even further and the reward is yours.

It's been 3rd time you are refusing to give rewards for the story. His native language is NOT english but all of us thinks that, this story is pretty good. As an administration representative you'uld show some tolerance for it because We were FORCED to move from Turkish server to England server. Even in the beganning he should not write the story in english for that. Administration should open sub-forums for each country players and each country should has their own moderator to help and improve the game it self. The attitude of the administration is so deeply ignorant and single sided and i don't think i am the only one who thinks like that.
We definitely agree. Our age friends who have a lot of difficulty with the language, and are deprived of certain things because we do not know english. no options available for anyone to come here and not come. You need to be a little discreet and have forced the government.
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#18 Post by phoenixdream »

Congraliations
I agry to my friends so ı dont write english in forum ı will use my leangue

Bu şekilde bir dayatma kabul edilemez ve bundan sonra forumda kendi ana dilimi kullanacağım yazdıklarımı merak eden olursa yabtürkçe öğrensin yada google translate kullansın
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#19 Post by Sulawesi »

This problem concerns the entire server. They added 11 countries to uk server and they should add 11 sub-forum in 11 languages to forum.
Also there should be representatives for countries (like moderators). These representatives may be selected from those who know English. So, they can help in the dialogue between management and their nationals.
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#20 Post by GodWhipAttila »

tebrikler.

phoenixdream wrote:Congraliations
I agry to my friends so ı dont write english in forum ı will use my leangue

Bu şekilde bir dayatma kabul edilemez ve bundan sonra forumda kendi ana dilimi kullanacağım yazdıklarımı merak eden olursa yabtürkçe öğrensin yada google translate kullansın
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#21 Post by Metallica2012 »

you guys wanna try to make your story in turkish ?

how can you ever imagine, from a person whos mother tonque is not english,to post a perfect one.
come on this is not fair.


so give him whatever he deserverd.
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#22 Post by MemduhDemon »

ırkçılık yapılıyor sanırım !!!!
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#23 Post by tayfunto »

My governor warned me about 7 level ruin... in Turkish language.
then i called MemduhDemon and told him there is a lot of BG... in Turkish language.
he made a calculation and sadly informed me that we couldnt beat... in Turkish language.
then he called Lancelet to beat it 7 lev. ruin... in Turkish language.
They got victory message as: "Saldıran taraf zafer kazandı!"... in Turkish language.

but everyone asks them to describe it in English language.
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#24 Post by Sulawesi »

Şu dil mevzusunu buradan alıp başka bir başlığa taşıyalım aslında daha çok insana ulaşır, 11 ülke ve dil var bu forumda ve herkes kendi dilinde yazabilmeli...

We can open another topic for language problem, so we can reach more people. There are 11 countries and 11 languages on this forum and every player should be able to use own languages...
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#25 Post by lancelet »

we are looking forward to present :)
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#26 Post by Arbash »

The reward will be issued to you on Friday.
To all those speaking about Turkish/English. Not knowing English language is no excuse for writing rather not interesting stories, neither for demanding the reward for it. Now, after the improvements, the story can be rightfully rewarded.
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#27 Post by Metallica2012 »

After you haved merged several servers into UK server ( they didnt ask us we want merged to UK ) i dont know yet how many different languages are speaking here now. The point is as we dont speak all so good to post here an entire story so it should be allowed to post in the mother tonque at least open one space for every foreign language used here.
we dont need to communicate here in english because all the merged ppl didnt choice this server as a host.
but you must bring the service to us. ) think why )

logical and simple bu true.


sorry for my bad English it is not my mother tonque
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